So America just had to go and invent this thing called Prom. Where girls get all dolled up and boys look nice for once in their lives and we spend loads of money for three hours. Darn you America for being the only country to take this type of stuff seriously! I have this dress that I'm like in love with but unfortunately I can't get it because my mom think it cost too much.
So let me give you a rundown of all the prom finances
Dress- $300
Shoes- $50-80
Accessories- $50-80
Hair-$ 300
Nails- $ 30
Make-Up- Free
Car- ----- (Probably some obscene amount)
Over all prom is just tooo much. My friends ask me why don't I just economize and said to pick a cheaper dress but I feel that if I buy a cheap dress then of course it'll look cheap. And I'd rather not go to prom then to be seen in a dress that don't look as good as I want it to. My friends got really annoyed with me but I don't care because maybe they don't care about if they'll look great at prom but I do! And their fashion sense is soo one dimensional. I'm over the whole prom thing now because I only have one month and I still don't have a dress nor do I have a date! How Pathetic.
Things cost too much! I have to pay a $750 concert choir fee..... yea right
I have to give Clark Atlanta $625 by June 1st
I have to find money to pay for my tuition plus room and board mind you its almost $23, 000
WHY ME?!!!!!!!
2 comments:
Interest/Attention:5
This really grabs my attention because i'm really excited about prom!!
Tone:4
It is very conversational and I really relate because prom is really over rated, it's one night and people spend an entire year getting ready for the special day!
COntent:4
The ideas is really unique and you are telling the truth about prom i really like this selection!
Interest/Attention- 5
Your topic was attention grabbing and easy for all teens to relate.
Tone- 4
Your tone was very easy going but it focused too much on you and not on the audience.
Content-4
Good Job
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